The
Way to Deal with Errors
When I read Chapter Nine:
Assignments: Outline, Student Texts Drive
Them in Teaching Writing Online,
I was impressed by some ideas in the introduction. For example, using many
informal assignments is a function both of what the students are doing and of
the way we look at and evaluate their work; because students write so much
online, we can free ourselves from tendencies to focus on error in students’
writing (94). However, when assignments are important, we end up trying to find
reasons to state the flaws as a way of justifying grades rather than working
with student texts. So, as an OW teacher, in order to deal with students’ error
properly, we should understand what errors can do in our evaluation, and how to
evaluate students’ work.
First, errors can be unprofitable intrusions upon the consciousness
of the reader, influencing the clarity of students’ work. When we are reading
students’ work, we can ignore it if there is few grammar mistakes and continue
reading. However, if there are too many grammar mistakes, we can’t ignore them,
and those mistakes become an obstacle in our reading process. As a result,
those technical errors discourage our access to larger ideas of students’ work,
shifting the reader’s attention from where he is going (meaning) to how he is
getting there (code).
Second, errors can be a reflection of students’ logic map in
writing. A closer look for students’ work will reveal very little that is
random or “illogical” in what they have written. Writers never make mistakes
out of no reason, which can be they haven’t learned the specific writing rules
before, or they are influenced by their first language, and so on. I used to
have a student, who always used wrong conjunctions in his writing. One time, I
had a conversation with him, asking him about why he used some specific
conjunctions, and he told me that because he saw other students used them as
well. Until then, I realized that he used those conjunctions improperly because
he didn’t understanding the meaning of them, only knowing how to spell them.
Last but not least, what should we expect toward errors in
students’ work? On the one hand, we need to decide the type of error. Normally,
they can be divided into two types, which are sentence issue and global issue.
If it is a sentence issue, it may lie in punctuation, syntax, spelling, and vocabulary.
If it is global issue, it may lie in the structure, the content, or the theme.
Global issue is the prior concern for teachers when evaluating students’
writing. When faced with global issue, we should ask students questions, and
try to get them to talk, listening what they think about their writing. As for sentence
issue, if there are too many, some type of specific instruction may need to be
taken into account seriously.
On
the other hand, the type of assignments have something to do with the
evaluation. Small assignments should be used for the purpose of allowing
students to work out on a minor scale what we've taught them, and large
assignments are a culmination of how well they learned those things. For
example, for a journal or post, we may not need to be too picky for we care
more about students’ ideas. However, for a term paper or a test, we may concern
about students’ grammar as well.
To
sum up, students errors definite influence our expectation toward their writings.
In order to help students get rid of errors, we should look closely at their work,
rather to be certain to see nothing but a chaos of errors when encountering their
writing. As students produce a variety of texts in the OW course, our job is to
help them to explore and take productive risks to develop their writing, not
being scared by errors.
Works Cited
Warnock, Scott. Teaching
Writing Online. NCTE: Illinois. 2009. Print.
I couldn't agree with you more! Too often I've heard the phrase "man that teacher is such a grammar Nazi"! Our intent through assessing student writing should not lend itself to seeking out every single writing rule infraction we can possibly find, but to actually look at the broader picture. A misplaced comma here or there is not necessarily life ending, but repeated errors may reveal a pattern that can and possibly should be taken into consideration, not only for assessment purposes, but to help bring bad writing habits to light for the student.
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